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No Choice (Aldultry)

In the shadows, linked by honey kisses
we slip into a fog of indescretion.

My angel in devil leather - lips of silk and cotton
    I can feel you
roughly and so softly convincing me
        to let myself go...
    into you

Disaster is a calamity and a necessity to survive
the lies and the ties that bind us at my hips,
              in my hips,
                  -  kiss my lips  -
                    -    and kill me so    -
              For it seems there is no force strong enough to stop
the inevitable flow  of your persuasion

And so I give up
and beg you to
Do what you will.
                    just promise me
                    my unavoidable temptation
            Just be certian
                  My delightful little abomination
That you make it worth pain of tomrrows regrets.

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  • DeathLight
    January 30

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    Excellent

    It's like having a woman take you by the chin and pull your face close into hers and tell you " This is it, baby, this is all we got so don't hit me with no weak shit."
    If Romeo and Juliet were Bonnie and Clyde.......


    • Lady Patricia
      January 30
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      Laughs!!

      I like that -- If Romeo and Juliet were Bonnie and Clyde. I dig.
      Thanks for the comment, Spook.
  • Writing2Escape
    November 21, 2008

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    I hate to use a cliche word like imagery, but this has it. The emotional aspect of it, the passion behind it, it contagious, consuming, and wonderful. And yet I have to wonder as I read it...