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Some Time For Me

I need to take a rest
From the people of the world
You're starting to be a real pest
But what am I to do
Do I run or hide?
I guess I'm gunna pull away
And take myself to the side

Some time for me
Is all I ask
Is that so hard to see
Can't stay at home
Can't be free
Just wanna be alone

Author notes

UHmmm wrote this 2 years ago but I wanted to add it anyways...have fun with it!
Written December 24th, 2003

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  • Boycrazy813
    March 8, 2004
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    WRITE MORE POEMS!!!!!!! J/K I LUV YA
    K!TTY

  • BeautiflDeadGrl
    February 7, 2004
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    awwwwwwwwww.... great poem ash....this is jess kirby i didnt know you had a sn on here well im gonna read more some time later but this is a good poem have fun!!!
    jess
    ps:believe


  • earthlygoddess
    January 3, 2004
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    I really relate to this. It's quite good, I look forward to reading more of what you have to say. Thanks so much for likeing "ridiculous charade" I'm pleased that it brought out some enthusiasm from you. Take care and peace -mary/nevaeh

  • Boycrazy813
    December 29, 2003
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    wow this is really great ash,i can totally relate to it.keep up the great work,and write ,more poems i love reading them.
    keep rockin
    luv ya and miss you much
    luv chels

  • DryingTears
    December 29, 2003
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    wow..i actually told my friends yesterday that i needed a break from them..so i know how you feel..I really like this poem...Keep up the good work

  • ledbytemptation
    December 26, 2003
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    sucks to be suffocated by the others in your world. hope all goes well with evrything. keep writing, u write great poems.

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