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Pain and Agony


I left you behind when I walked away
buried you deep and left you to stay
trying to keep my thoughts astray
from the pain and very far away

Don't come back to look at me
I left you behind with the agony
Walking away to try to be free
trying to burn bridges in between

I look out the window and stare
knowing you don't really care
not wanting the memory to stay
I pay my check and walk away

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  • malmadre gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    I like the final line, it brings the relationship to a definite end...I am this kind of person... when it's over...it's over! You have my applause!


  • echo-ink
    May 23, 2008
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    Good poem

    I left you behind with the agony is a goooood line. Good luck in the contest!