Soft sound echoing in my heart--
simple words you said to me
silence of nervous lips touching lips
tears falling onto the dirty concrete floor
lyrics to that punk rock song
death of a piece of me named innocence
--remind me of you and grow louder.
Author notes
from the Innocence Dead collection. Poem 6 of 15.
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Comments
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I like this even though it is short. I think you couldve emphasized a little more, painted me a better picture. The vocabulary is limited so I think you could try to push the envelope on that. Over all though nice write.
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