I ride memories
to bring me back home
Author notes
Always challenging to write with only 10 words. this peice, i wrote because im moving away from my home... and that is what i do..i daydream and it takes me back there.
A contest entry
- 10 words by Melissa Gayle.
400 points, ended May 27, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative use of 10 words. So well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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I can totally understand this piece.
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Great imagery. You say a lot in so few words. Very well done.
Garrison
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I know exactly how this feels; I live with my parents four months of the year, go to uni (aka home) for eight months, and soon have to leave both. Meh.
Awesome use of ten words! Beats mine for sure.
hiraeth.
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