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You pressed the doorbell
and caught me --
dumbfounded.
You and the open door
expressed tears through silence.
I opted to good memories,
and accepted
our seed
of love in progress.
`
Author notes
30 words
A contest entry
- 30 words by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended June 1, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautifully filled with hope and love.
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Beautiful piece, warm wishes in the contest.


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a wonderful moment here...


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I enjoy the idea of love being "a seed in progress..."
beautiful





