As our fingers intertwined
And the scent of your skin
Lingered in my hair
I buried my face into your neck
While I whispered "I love you"
So faint that only the fireflies could hear it
I felt your heart skip
And heard you say "I'll never leave you"
Promises;Promises
[Always meant to be broken]
You're my prince in shining tin-foil
On the pony you bought last Christmas
And I'm your Princess in tattered clothing
Trying to dodge the pea in my cardboard mattress
Baby; we were meant to be
Under the stars
Where the fireflies dance
And the stars make wishes
(Instead of grant them)
Love;baby;dollface;
Tell me you love me
And mean it this time
Author notes
mhmm...this is the product of really bad writers block..comments?
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I dont agree at all...with your authors notes I mean...this seems to be the product of a cure from writers block. This poem just spoke the truth of EVERY relationship that ever existed LOL.
Nicely penned
ASM
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if this is writer's block, may you never get your muse back! this is amazingly good!!
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Stars make wishes... there were so many beautiful, magical lines in here. It felt like a fairytale... I don't think this comes from a bad writer's block! No way!
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
A+wesome
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I diagree this is not writers block but a perfect write! I so enjoyed this some sounding all to familar to my own past.
A wonderful write the imagery is exceptional!
Lifetime
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wow, you had some terrific, descriptive lines
that really added depth to this poem of
love. great job on this one.
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