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True Beauty



Like a ship upon the sea
His mercy surrounds me
The whisper of his love
from the wings of a dove

Beauty flows through me
from the love of his majesty
My God, my king, my groom
his love fills the very room

The blessings he bestows on me
reminds me that I am worthy
to be in the presence of my king
feeling him each day beside of me

Material things are not my thing
I am in love with a worthy king
The one man that truly loves me
I love him for his true beauty


Author notes

Prompt: Psalm 45:1 (The Message Bible Paraphrase)

My heart bursts its banks, spilling beauty and goodness.
I pour it out in a poem to the king,
shaping the river into words

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  • myorama
    May 23, 2008
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    A wonderful tribute to a most worthy King. Your love comes through very strongly God Bless


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    Nice,

    I always enjoy Psalms.
    Wonderfully penned piece sweet sister soul.

    -Love Brother Timothy


  • ButterflyforChrist
    May 22, 2008

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    gorgeous! I love the pure heartfelt emotion in this I feel your love for God shining through. Beautiful job! This is wonderful!

    God bless and good luck!