Arriving at the top of the stairs,
behold the brilliance of his light,
Greeted by past loved ones
and God himself,
Welcome Child, you may rest at peace.
Author notes
this is what i think what will happen when i die in a about 29 words
A contest entry
- 30 words by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended June 1, 2008, 16 entries
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Short but you made a point
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b/c thats what the contest requires..it was like 30 words and under or something like that.
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I hope that you are right. This is lovely even through the sadness.
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very good jess, but why only 29? still... good job
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short and sweet very deep and emotional i really like this nice word
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