Look at my reflection what do you see
Do you see the pain and suffering inside of me
This world bringing sorow to my life its never ending
Were is my gaurdian angle that god is not sending
Why is this my life
Giving me thoughts of turning to the knife
But to kill myself would condem me to hell
But it seems I am already there
so I might as well
Look at my reflection what do you see
That is no illusion
that is me
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Reflections by Folklor.
461 points, ended May 29, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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this is fantastic! i love it so much. your rhyme is perfect i would only say add question mark to why is this my life? other than that its flawless! and your eding was stunning. the realisation of reflection and the solitude of knowledge. fantastic.
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wow
I think my poem in this contest is good
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