Streching my dreams~

I have always known myself
and carried many childhood memories
with me even the ones
that never belonged to me--
and now my heart is sore
my mind is empty
but I still spread my dreams
and stretch them
until they reach to you
because I only want to know myself in you~

A contest entry

Celebrating 100 days on AP- Contest is to catch the moment of perfect reflection by Topaze. 900 points, ended June 3, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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By me, right now

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Cynthia Gaines
June 3, 2008
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Congratulations on winning the golden chalice!!!
SpydurPoet
May 29, 2008

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Wow. This is incredible. The flow and word selection made it very smooth and beautiful. Best of luck in the contest.
Puppydog
May 23, 2008

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SO VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!
As one feels low and sad they find so much solace in people like them, who are able to feel the very things they feel for they themselves have experienced them in their own lives.
PerVirtuous
May 23, 2008

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This is very interesting and somehow disturbing. I think it invites, begs for tragedy when we lose ourselves in another. It is great to abandon oneself, but in controlled abandon! this is a wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.
theredcatjazzoflove
May 23, 2008

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wow nice bright colors here and besides that this was really a great piece here thanks for sharing good luck in the contest