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The Color

Blood.

A color rather than an object.
The color
of death.
of pain.
of suffering.
of life.

A rainbow-like spectrum of possibilities
Pouring from one simple word

Blood.

A contest entry

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 23, 2008
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    Its a good write..its maybe a little to simple, could have gone deeper, but I still like it

    Thank you and good luck


    Cindy


  • MichaelBe
    May 23, 2008

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    I think this poem is very good. The meaning has been kept very strong by the short length, and I fell you have used the prompt very well: nice work.


  • lovethosedinosaurs
    May 22, 2008
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    Wow.. this is put together really well. Short, but I enjoyed reading it.