death
waiting
wanting
there is no escape
she is out to get me
i fear her not
i am the one love forgot
it was nothing that i ever expected, but it came and went, and with i whimper i shall concede...
fade out
Please tell me what you think
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hey you love! thank oyu for calling me on my birthday it was great to hear from you! i wonder is death always a she to you. or are we females just after you that bad?
i love you
your american girl -
Interesting you describe Death as a 'she'... Symbolic somehow? Very deep and complex... I especially like the last two lines - gave the poem a strong close.
hope you doin ok 
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