Love is Cheetos,
Not Chocolate.
Love is a cactus,
Not a rose.
Love is brown,
Not pink.
Love is excrutiating,
Not perfect.
Love is demanding,
Not easy.
Love is rare,
Not cliche.
Love is a state of being,
Not a word.
Love is hitting,
Not kissing.
Love is yelling,
Not flirting.
Love is taking,
Not giving.
Love is asking,
Not lending.
Love is crying,
Not smiling.
Love is the hardest, most challenging, most painful, most annoying, most consuming, most irritating, most petty, most tedious feeling I have.
Yet I have it still.
A contest entry
- Love by Ethereal Bard.
316 points, ended May 25, 2008, 10 entries
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Very unique view on Love
It is true, sometimes love stinks - I love the ending lines tho - Love is the hardest, most challenging, most painful, most annoying, most consuming, most irritating, most petty, most tedious feeling I have.
Yet I have it still.
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Love is instilled within us
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The title and first line threw me for a minute, but it works really well in the poem. It love it it's great.
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I like this. It is not a cliche, common love poem; it is origional. And very nice parallel structure.
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which of my poems did u base it off of?
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hon you put a twist of humor in this i can tell you the title most definately drew me in you did great good luck
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