Places my soul seeks;
in my mind,
are out of reach.
Others are in distant dreams.
Some I have sowed
and tendered.
My times
unguided past,
gives way to eternity.
Author notes
make an impact in 30 words.
left align.
no rhyme.
In a list
A contest entry
- 30 words by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended June 1, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very full, there is a feeling of hope and renewal here.
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This is an excellent take onthe prompt so muc has been said in so few words
The muse and pen give rise to some brilliance and as you do thoughts to linger over and ponder the philosophy .... a reflection of mind. hope this does well in the contest. Bookmarked
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I truly love this...It touched me, and that is poetry that leaves an impact...
Awesome
Lynda
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