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Only To Realize

Life's journey
becomes our mortal misconception,
juxtaposed with each other,
only to realize
in the end,
we have traveled
alone.

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make an impact in 20 words.

left align.

no rhyme.

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 28, 2008
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    I agree!
    Marlene

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    very nicely written.


  • Kelli Marie
    May 22, 2008

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    I think you have definitely make an impact with this great piece of poetry. I hope you do well in the contest.
    Kelli