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(In the End) There Was Dark

In the end there was dark

And all the songs and poetry of billions of years

(Trillions of inhales and exhales)

Tears and echoes of laughs

All of them

And the very walls of space

Ripped from anything that ever was

Into nothing that ever was.



At the end of the end

There was light.

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  • thegoldenpath
    May 23, 2008
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    I like the imagery and a unique take on the prompt which is always refreshing. good job and thanks.