A green in a black world, in so many ways,
The radical one, the girl who stays,
Content, unique, and quite the kind
Who helps out them who're left behind,
Shes distinctly different, but pleasant too,
She's happy, cheerful, and though she's blue
She sticks around to try her best,
Whether its school, or sports, or something less
She stands out, is well noticed
Though she struggles inside, shes like a lotus
Empowered dosent even begin to describe
Her joy, love and plain good vibes
You'd have to ask to find where it comes from
The light in the dark, and the peace that is shown
She tried so hard and now it shows
And really, truly, now she glows
A contest entry
- Picture inspired contest of contests by squirrelgirl.
1200 points, ended June 3, 2008, 6 entries
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I like this. Nice rhyming and good rhythm. I thought this part was particularly good:
"Shes distinctly different, but pleasant too,
She's happy, cheerful, and though she's blue
She sticks around to try her best,
Whether its school, or sports, or something less"
Congratz on your hardware!
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The rhyme is awesome on this! And it fits so well with the pic!
She tried so hard and now it shows
And really, truly, now she glows
I LOVE that part, it is so amzing
~ Bright Smyles
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