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Wrong Kind Of Right

Hope floats further away
everytime you leave the room
But I keep telling myself
something will happen soon
You will show me you really care
Instead of just leaving me hanging here

And it feels so unfair that to win you for me
I have to not try to win you at all
Not trying to claim you, how can I love you
if I can't even miss you or call?

I'm all for independence
and I'm all for living your own life
But I just want to be your girl
and you act as if I want to be your wife
and you act as if I want to be your wife

Don't you think of me
the way you say that you do
Don't you want this to work
just as bad as I want it to?
Can you show me you really care?
'Cause right now I don't feel you're there

And it feels so unfair that I'm taking a leap
because this is all new to me too
You're not the only one who's having these issues
but you're not even letting me help you

'Cause I'm all for independence
and I'm all for living your own life
But I just want to be your girl
and you act as if I want to be your wife
and you act as if I want to be your wife

I've lost faith too
I've also been bruised
I don't believe
fairytales are real
You're complicated
well so am I
That doesn't mean
I keep making you try
I need space too
you're not alone
Maybe I'll get there
once you're gone?

'Cause I'm all for independence
and I'm all for living your own life
But I just want to be your girl
and you act as if I want to be your wife
So maybe this is goodbye
To the wrong kind of right

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  • yes it is always the wrong kind of write i must say you nailed this i like your thoughts in this poem thanks for sharing