Tightness in my chest,
I gasp for breath,
Wanting to sink, subcum to darkness,
Slowly words start to make sense.
A contest entry
- 20 words by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Very scary; I didn't realize it would feel like that. Great last line!
Marlene -
I have asthma, I can understand this.
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