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Wishing

The day you left I cried
The next day I danced
I wish I hadnt

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    Interesting ideas.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    Interesting....I think i get what you mean...this is pretty good good luck


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 23, 2008

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    Regrets of love that walked out the door. Thinking we will be happy when its finally over, only to realize we still love and miss that person. 15 words or less, I think you did an awesome job here! ~Sie


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    i really like this...

    great entry, great 15 words


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