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Yesterday

When I left, long ago
I never imagined I would return here
And stare upon your face
Wishing for yesterday

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 28, 2008
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    Nice sentiment of regret and rethinking your past actions.
    Marlene

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    Very nicely done.


  • Pandorea
    May 25, 2008
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    nice. 20 words is hard but this is still pretty.


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 23, 2008

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    When I left...never imagined I would return. Seeking a love that held us bound, only by wishing for yesterday. Very inspiring, and a great write. ~Sie