(Headstone of a Movie Star)
In life he was a movie star
But couldn't bear the surgeon's scar,
So dealt himself a fatal blow
And now he festers down below.
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Option 7: Celebrity
A contest entry
- Headstones!! by Parearoo.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very intersting piece of work..excellent job
Ruby
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sounds like he could now audition for a role in the addams family, i am sure they will need some stinking good talent.
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Very nice!
(Here's his sequel.)
In death he is a rotting corpse
his bones decay, his casket warps,
and as his soul begins to burn
he wants another earthly turn!
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cool
This one is different...but, who says different is bad? :-) You have a very intresting peice of work here; a tough one to beat in this contest! Great job!
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