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Another Tear


I'm begging
Don't be another tear
Lost in my sea

A contest entry

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 27, 2008
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    I like, this don't be another cause of tears. Well said.
    Marlene

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    I like the image in this.


  • Kelli Marie
    May 22, 2008

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    Great metaphor. You've done a wonderful job with your ten word choice. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
    Kelli