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Poem For A Newborn

Smile little angel for the world is almost new - as i wrap this tiny blanket to protect a tiny you

The world is full of chances and paths that you must take, the good lord gives us options - so its never make or break

Treat people with respect my friend - and to your closest give your love, give people that you care about all that they dream of

Find yourself a partner - and never lie or cheat - my friend this world was built with love, it was not built with deceit

Save up all your money and fly around the skies, the world you know is just a glimpse & you must open you eyes

Never fear the unknown and never question fear - for however much you fly away I'll always be right here

Author notes

Just something I thought of really , I was inspired by the song "father & son" and this came to my head .. its probably rubbish but I would appreciate feedback

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  • This sounds like something someone would warn a new born baby of.. Very creative

    Sammie xox

  • luv2dream gold member
    May 25
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    gave me chills...


  • Lexie
    May 22

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    loved another one of your poems. you are blessed with such talent. how long did it tak eyou to get so good at writing poems?