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Dear Old Gert

In shopping old Gert coundn't be topped
till she walked by where they'd recently mopped
now that she's dead
it can truly be said
she really did shop till she dropped.

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this is about a friend of mine

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  • kishi-tenshi
    July 11, 2008
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    CUTE!!! like it,,,


  • ellaelu
    May 23, 2008

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    HEy K,
    this made me lmao. The shop til she dropped made me think you might be talking about me?!!! LOL.. it is really cute.


  • Mirthryl
    May 22, 2008
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    Love the take off on "shop 'til you drop!" Nice rhyming.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    HA HA! this is cute! good luck!


  • Parearoo
    May 22, 2008

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    Different, but awesome!

    Yes, it can be said she "shopped til she dropped!" Very nicely done; I love the limerick style you used here! Great job!

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