Watching winds whirl,
I wait for him
to woo me with soft whispers
as his fingers play
gliding gently through tresses
then trace my lips.
I sigh
anticipating his kiss.
♥♥
~
Author notes
make an impact in 30 words
A contest entry
- 30 words by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended June 1, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So much Ws and Ss and issessess, I can FEEL this poem. And...I'm a guy. So that's pretty gorram impressive =-)
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Beautifully tender. Very nicely done.
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thank you!
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whoo hoo....a photgenic moment in these few rods.......awesome!!!!!
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absolutely beautiful. i read it out loud and it was pretty amazing. great flow. good job!
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thank you for the lovely comment!
Lynda
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