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Angel Choirs

Darkness surrounds her
As she cries for it to end
A light is at the end of the tunnel
A smile appears on her face
As angel choirs welcome her

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Angels are waiting...

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    For a sad thought, there is wonderful hope there too.


  • BehindTheShadow
    May 25, 2008
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    Wonderful job!!


  • Jezebelle Darktree
    May 22, 2008

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    this is awsome. you got an entire poem into a small stanza. excellent. i dont think i could have done better myself. excellent and good luck!

    ~Jess~