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May 16 proceeds not preoccupied pregnant Q and A day

oh daughter leans on my back
with weight of closed book cover
for me to talk amongst her

so dreams by artichoke chapter
through wiggled counted toes
is marked anew






Author notes

good luck is not about components of compsure; Isaiah 65:11

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though plant/animal types pull me well

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 28, 2008
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    this is excellent. unique images but thorough emotion. really well done.