See my feet, so complete,
They're just itchin' to dance.
Got a soul, so replete,
It says, "Take a chance!"
Wanna live, wanna give,
Wanna dance in that world.
Throw my heart in its sieve,
Like a hat to be hurled.
I heard my mom sing to me.
She's so sweet, wanna see her.
Gotta come out, gotta see
Am I a sister, or a brother?
Got no care, got no fear
To hold me back.
Got my heart, full of cheer,
It's a love attack.
Can hardly wait just to breath,
My first will be a scream.
Got some feelings that have teeth.
I'm a living dream!
Author notes
Had to...had fun, too!
A contest entry
- Picture prompt...check it out! by Li snuffles.
500 points, ended May 23, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ah this is so sweet!!!! You did a wonderful job with this write!!! Oh your words are beautiful!!! This is such a heartfelt write!! This is truly amazing and beautiful every line and every word!!! Your background and picture are perfect!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
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This is a wonderful write. And goes along with what we have been discussing in real life.... pro's and con's of abortion. Nice write.
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Sweet and innocent
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oops i forgot these
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God bless your new niece and her mother and aunt. May you all be given much love, protection and peace. We both know it's a crazy world. May your niece show this much exuberance as the baby here in this write. May she love life!
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Oh I love this. My sister just had a baby. She was 19 and a senior when she got pregnant. Many people told her to get an abortion but she kept it. Now she has a beautiful baby girl and I am truly thankful that she didn't listen. I don't think I've seen a more beautiful baby. My mom says she has my pout lol, hey at least i gave her something. An excellent write. I love it!!!
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so adorable and a delight to read
beautifully written
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This is a cute and happy write.
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awh this was so cute; you can just picture the baby stomping around inside, in its own little dance, just dying to come out lol ;-) bless us!
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Great Take!
This is wonderful! Such an apt take on the promt! Now I wannna dance & sing! Yes, life is bursting forth on the scene & the flow & rhyme of this is perfect! Nice work friend!
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A wonderful and happy song, enjoyed it much!
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Very cute and made me think of my almost to be born grandchild. We spend hours talking about her and wondering what she will be like. Thank you for sharing such a lovely song with us.
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I have no idea why, but this poem made me cry!
(in a good way) it was so joyful and happy and i was thinking about my little one thinking all those things and wanting to come out to find out so many things!
Thank you so much for entering, it was a lovely piece
and good luck..xxx
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it reads like a song
sooo adorable
exquisite
God bless my friend...
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