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Love Remains

Missing image

Forest dark and quiet

she met him as promise

knowing their time

would leave her love

expanding on her form.

 

No longer able to deny

how her heart could burn

for one who wasn't part of their village,

but passion's have a soul to claw at the will.

 

They spoke of leaving

of finding a world without hate

where a couple could live

absent the cruelty of misunderstanding.

 

He promised to return to the forest

once he found their paradise,

so she comes each day to the same clearing,

hoping his face she'll once again see.

 

Family and neighbors give her stern stares

as the life created on that night

continues growing inside,

but she endures it all

clinging to dream

that he'll return to free her from their eyes.

 

How harsh the world can be

when you see a troll as god,

refusing to let what others think

ruin your dreams of happiness.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    June 7, 2008
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    Your last line has a typo, should be your instead of you. Other than that tiny thing, this is an amazing story, that you have given this woman. Theme reminds me of the song "there is no arizona". This is a wonderful take on the picture, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


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  • paperbackwriter
    May 22, 2008
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    this is the best poem i have ever read on AP