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Black Tear Drops

Everyone will lose a tear,
Some will hide it in layers of silk,
Other wish to cry in your arms.

Loss of love,
Pain,
Suffering of the heart,
Memoires coming back again.

I panic,
My breathing stops,
My tears are not pure,
But blackened - like ash.

No one knows what happened,
Never shall they learn the truth,
It's a secret locked with my sins,
I am not the one to forgive.

Nothing shall I do wrong,
Love is all I need,
Protection is all I seek,
My black tears are a secret to all.

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  • Theory Of The Lost
    June 18, 2008

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    very nice write, it had a nice flow to it, just the right length, well worded, you had a bit of imagery mixed in wich added to your write very well done and i'd love to have you as an AP Sister, you got yourself a bro bro!!! nice write and good luck


  • ScissorhandHugs
    May 22, 2008
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    awesum poem!! good luck