Silently appears
slippery and shy
a pilgrim tear
in your beautiful eyes.
Your glimpse is damp
with crystal drops
and your heart palpitates
sobs of sorrows.
A faded portrait
of an angel that has gone
you miss him so much
so sweet and lovely was.
In each bright star
shining in the sky
you will ever see
his angelical smile.
A glint of sadness
in your broken heart
a fervent prayer
mitigate your grief.
Comments
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Sadness is so common in our world but not enough pray to their god to mitigate the grief. Well thought out and well constructed, enhanced with a clear presentation.
Very well done.
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good as rhythm ; a poem permeated of sadness but wonderfully well built with its sweet images. Marvins
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