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Love/hate

love
my feelings for you,

hate
your feelings for me.

A contest entry

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  • Unsigned gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    Very nice...

    I really liked the angst and hurt portrayed here even though the second stanzza is a presumption it is a valid one due to the perspective of the writer...

    Simon