Deb had to go potty and 'cause she was naughty,
She went right there on the spot.
The teacher came over, grabbed her by the shoulder,
And started to yank her up.
They fell in a muddle and rolled in the puddle,
Of mud, poopy, and pee.
And though they looked yucky, all muddy and cucky,
They both laughed uproariously.
A contest entry
- It Is Time For Rhyme by Dalaney.
850 points, ended June 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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That was great! Good luck.

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Thnx!
Glad ya' liked it, (Honestly) - a little 'pun' there!
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