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Deb Had to Go Potty

Deb had to go potty and 'cause she was naughty,
She went right there on the spot.
The teacher came over, grabbed her by the shoulder,
And started to yank her up.
They fell in a muddle and rolled in the puddle,
Of mud, poopy, and pee.
And though they looked yucky, all muddy and cucky,
They both laughed uproariously.

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  • honestlylost
    May 27, 2008
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    That was great! Good luck.


    • echo-ink
      May 27, 2008
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      Thnx!

      Glad ya' liked it, (Honestly) - a little 'pun' there!