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Trash or Treasure

One mans trash
is another mans treasure
If he made your heart crash
it would be my pleasure

To show you what he's missing
with my arms round you
As I'm softly kissing
a love I fell into

Someday I will thank him
for throwing you away
He thought you made his life grim
now you brighten up my day

So you thought your life was over
when you lost your man
But now you found your lover
not a one night stand

For when I said I love you
I felt my heart tremor
This is when I knew
it would be for ever













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  • flyingphoenix
    May 24, 2008

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    this was very nice! I liked the opening lines, and the general feel to the whole piece.

    Its very sweet, and it does remind me well that there are other men out there who won't just throw me away.

    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    Sunny