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Embrace

Lowered gaze from across the room
Rises to meet, by chance
  Yours 

Playful smile tickles your heart
And a wink
  Steals it away 

Delicate steps join in unison
Two figures by tender grasp
  Bound 

Gentle caress up and down
Your shoulders ignites
  The flame inside 

Velvet lips explore my neck
And moisten my appetite for
  Desire 

Ardent arms lie me down
Effortlessly and with the
  Best of care 

Fondling strokes against by skin
Heat the moment, setting us both
  Aflame 

Wholesome embrace commences
A ritual occurrence that can only be
  Described as divine 



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LuminousKiss

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  • borrowing.moonlight gold member
    June 30, 2008
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    jesus ><
    that was amazing... it completely got to me
    thanks for entering this


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 27, 2008

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    Beautifully done. These are soft words full of tenderness and the perfect touch of being sensual.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    such embracing loving words you penned here comming from the shadows of your thoughts think you did a grea job thanks for sharing