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Tissues

Drug’s, took his love for her astray 

    She needed a box of tissues

Crying, was now her only way

    to cope with these issues 

.

She needed a box of tissues

   as tears flowed, from her eyes

To cope with these issues

   and her lover’s goodbyes

.

 One time, mountains he would climb 

  He loved her so much

Wedding bells, were going to chime  

  now gone, is his loving touch

.

 He loved her so much  

  but her addiction, a different story,

Now gone, is his loving touch

   She’s left with just his memory 

.

Drug’s, took his love for her astray

    She needed a box of tissues

Crying, was now her only way

   to cope with these issues

.

 She needed a box of tissues

   as tears flowed from her eyes

To cope with these issues

   and her lover’s goodbyes

.

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  • flyingphoenix
    May 22, 2008
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    Great form and great poem!!

    I really liked this form, with the repetition of the line. The lines you repeated were nice lines as well, very fitting.

    Nice rhyming and flow here as well. It's a really sad poem story, a great use of the prompt.

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

    Sunny