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Techno Heartbeats.

Once This Music Has Ended
I'll Keep Dancing
Because The Techno Beat
That Our Hearts Create
[Is Intoxicating]

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Suckage

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  • PsychedChicken
    December 1
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    This is great. I have no skill for writing short poems, but this is awesome.


  • Electric Chestnut
    November 30, 2008
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    very nice i quite like this
    short and lucid


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Very nicely written and not...uh how did you put it... "Suckage?" . This is a great metaphorical poem ...and I love it when someone uses words that contain a meaning other than the obvious articulation of those words. BRAVO! and nicely written


    ASM

  • She Stole My Voice
    May 22, 2008
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    aw I love this.
    How dare you say it's suckage.
    It's really cute.
    ♥


    ~Princess of Shadows~


  • Kelli Marie
    May 22, 2008

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    I don't think it is suckage, I think it is a pretty good piece of poetry. Very nice write. Stay possitive.
    Kelli

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