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Oh, Little One

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So you kick to get out, do you, oh little one?
Let me tell you about the outer world that you seek to join-
dogs eat dogs, nay, all eat all out there,
which will you be, oh little one?

In your dreamy womb you are also sheltered
from the terrible Land of Looks-
let me tell you about living in the Land of Looks-
it is a game of one-upmanship-
who has the better hair, clothes, car, dates, etc.
it becomes quite cruel and petty,
are you ready for that, oh dreamy one?

Other than that, the world out there is full of chance,
will you be able to see and grab the opportunities that sail by?

What will you become, oh little one?

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  • Li snuffles
    May 23, 2008

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    THis was a very different take from everyone else, and i thorougholly appreciate that!

    I thought it was an excellent take on the prompt! It describes how you enjoy being the one to keep your young protected, and dread the moment were he/she will come out into the REAL world, because he/she is completely dependent on everyone else

    The world may be harsh, but fill it with love and you'll make a difference

    Thank you for entering and good luck..xxx