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Girls and Boy's

You giggle like a silly goose
bat your eyes of baby blue
Am I suppose to like it..to be impressed
spinning around in your mommies dress

I just want to yell and run
play with frogs..now that is fun
Climb way up in a tree
throw some rocks at a Bumble Bee

So if you want to hang with the best
that's what it takes to stop being a pest
We could be best of friends you'll see
then when we grow you can bat those eye's at me

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  • pattyann4500
    June 2, 2008

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    Well, I'm not sure who whines more, boys or girls, or maybe they just come out even. This is really cute, and I enjoyed the invitation at the end. Good job. Thank you so much for your entry. Patricia


    • darlintlc silver member
      June 3, 2008
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      Thanks for reading!! I'm not sure who whines the most either but I raised three boys...grew up with five sisters and I'm pretty sure girls whine more!

      Thanks again
      darlintlc


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 26, 2008

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    Hahha. Wonderful imagery here. The piece flowed very well indeed. I love the rhyme too. Well done for this. And, good luck in the contest.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon


    • darlintlc silver member
      May 27, 2008
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      Thanks for commenting on "Girls and Boy's" glad it gave you a laugh! I know it's not your kind of poetry so I really feel good knowing you took the time to read it anyway! hee hee

      your friend
      darlintlc
      xxxooo


  • toomysterious
    May 23, 2008
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    Very cute. It is always so isn't it? Loved the way this is written.

    • darlintlc silver member
      May 23, 2008
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      Thanks for commenting on "Girls and Boys" it took me back to being a kid! lol


  • faderman1959
    May 22, 2008

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    This was great! I loved the sentiment and feeling of this! Those little girls! The power they possess!


    • darlintlc silver member
      May 23, 2008
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      Thanks for commenting on "Girls and Boy's" I was a tom-boy when I was little so I would hear all the things the boys would say about the girls and their pressy ways! lol

      your friend
      darlintlc


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 22, 2008

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    oooooooooooooo how cute.... this was wonderful.... great awesome write...... thanks for sharing... good luck in your contest...... hugs


    • darlintlc silver member
      May 23, 2008
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      Thanks for your comment on "Girls and Boy's" you are too nice!

      Hope ur feeling better
      peace to you
      darlintlc

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