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In And Out






Into the soil goes a seed,
Out of seed grows a bud.
Out of a bud comes blossom
Out of blossom comes a flower.
From flowers comes beauty
Out of beauty comes love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Help make the world a better place

by loving your friends, your family

and yourself unconditionally.

 

Be warm and tender.

A contest entry

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  • Autumn Whisper
    August 27
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    Such a beautiful poem uncle Brian. You're such a natural at this Awesome work. Keep it up.
    Congratulations on the gold trophy too.
    Nice one
    best wishes as always
    bradley


  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 31

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    wow wow wow!

    these few and simple words hit hard! they meant so much and they were so beautifully penned! a gorgeous write and i simply adore your background! keep penning, your words are touching!

    LOVELY!


  • sundrymarie
    July 18

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    your a great writer and thanks for the comment,i really never like my poems so having someone besides me friends saying that i dont suck means really something to me. I hope writing takes you far in the rest of your life.
    hugs&smiles,
    Sundry


  • poeticpieces
    June 8

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    Nice

    Congrates on your words so true and golden.
    Thanks for sharing, peace~

    Tim Jr. aka poeticpieces


  • nichtmich silver member
    June 5

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    Well done, Sky. A poetic metaphor for a rich and happy life. Small wonder you garnered the Gold. Kudos!

  • Majija
    May 27

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    Veey good poem. And most important: the subject is pure wisdom.
    Congratulations with the gold by the way.

    Majija

  • Sunshine Princess silver member
    May 27
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    Congratulatons on gold

  • Meet Your Meat
    May 27
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    oops forgot clappys!

    • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
      May 27
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      I don't remember which poem you wanted to know if it won or not Lindsay but nevertheless I thought I'd let you know anyway. Thanks very much.
      Brian

  • Meet Your Meat
    May 27

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    I'm really sorry i cannot lie i don't understand whats... I'm not quite sure this is it but you have a GOLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWSOME Your poem is (reading the poem now)....... I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good write

  • slick99
    May 26
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    great job!!!


  • slick99
    May 26
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    another great poem!


  • reymysterio
    May 26
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    and welcome to my contest

  • Mekhala
    May 25

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    Lovely...this poem means a great deal...I am back for my hollidays...how are you doing??? Thanks for the lovely peice...its really brilliant...
    Mekhala


  • reymysterio
    May 24

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    I love your poem because it has a meaning and i love meanings.





    bravo
    LOVE from your son andreas


  • TwilightAngel026
    May 23

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    Very nice. A little thing like a seed can go a long way. After all, every redwood tree had to come from a tiny seed... or acorn.

  • dawn.of.juliet
    May 23

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    this is pretty, just a little cliche, but i like the idea of it. seems very heartfelt to say the least
    thanks for entering
    good luck
  • Puppydog gold member
    May 23
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    VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    If one sows the seeds the best and most beautiful will come.

  • Sunshine Princess silver member
    May 22
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    This is pretty daddy I like your poem

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