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Hurt Thank You For Listening

Like the others say, I can know your pain
But I couldn't get used to it
As another bird has gone
It's like seven years alone
I just couldn't get used to it
And I believe in what I see here in your eyes
And I believe in what I see here in your eyes
I believe in what is real
The only thing is pain and it's so real
And I think you for listening to how I feel
'cause it's just what I needed, like the pain that made it real
And I finally found out how, because you finally showed me how
It feels to be you, and to be me... and to be me... and to be

Fast forward yesterday, to the things I wouldn't say
'cause I couldn't get used to it
Guess everything's my fault and I shouldn't do nothing' at all
'cause I couldn't get used to it.
'cause I believe in what I see here in your eyes
I believe in what I see 'cause I believe in what is real
If the only thing is pain then it's "so real"
And I thank you for listening to how I feel
'cause it's just what I needed, like the pain that made it real
And I finally found out how, because you finally showed me how
It feels to be you, and to be me... and to be me... and to be...
If I could I would I’d do anything to take back the hurt, frustration and the pain it brings
Some of those times you sat alone and realized "f**k!"
That's not the way you should have wanted it
if all of my actions show
it was good to be you and to be me again.
If all of my actions show, then all of the truth be told and all of my... 

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  • Few typos and words placed incorrectly such as:

    And I think you for listening to how I feel

    But the poem was packed full of raw emotions and was interesting to read, good job


  • Hushush
    May 24
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    Woah.

    That was soo good!
    You should sing it, lol.
    Really that was great judy.
    -Eva

  • This is really good Judy. Wonderful writing. You put so much emotion into this too. I could feel it as I read it. I really love this part:


    'Like the others say, I can know your pain
    But I couldn't get used to it
    As another bird has gone
    It's like seven years alone
    I just couldn't get used to it'

    I thought that that part there was so good. Well done Judy. You have a talent for sure.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    Wayne Leon
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