Socks in pairs?
Oh please, you jest!
And laces in shoes?
To chew they're the best!
Tissues not shredded?
Theres no fun in that!
But you just can't be angry,
I'm such a cute little cat.
Author notes
I know that its short, but it was a fun one to write. I have had several kittens over the years...
If needed and i feel inspired I could add to it.
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A contest entry
- ANIMAL ANTICS by forever dreaming.
350 points, ended June 7, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww..this is so cute! i always want a cat..but hey..i like my socks..;lol..just a very playful write..nice job
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hahah
i love this
this is amzing!
dont i know the feeling! i just got as new kitty! -
aww. it's soo cute. I love the flow and rhyme. keeps me from boredom. I like the picture too!! SO CUTE!! it's really good!
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Very cute and creative. I love the picture. I know little kids who would love this, as well as adults. IronMaiden hit the nail on the head, very Dr. Seuss! Congrats on the gold, and keep up the great work!
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Cute
nice flow, Suessish..coool
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Awww this is really cute. It was a very pleasant read and made me feel really happy inside.
Well written, good flow, etc. The only thing I would change is to change the picture to a cat actually doing something in the poem - playing with socks, chewing shoelaces, or tearing up tissues. And then maybe try deleting the "just" in the second to last line and changing the "such" in the last line to "just". I don't know, it's worth a try!
Good write. Thank you for giving me the pleasure of a nice read.
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thank you for your review, and for the suggestions, which if i get a spare few mins I will consider.
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lovely
and so true..
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very cute and fun! Theres lot of great imagery and words used as well as go flow! Great job :]
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This describes this hound of mine to a tee. We have now progreesed to electrical cables, wallpaper and loo roll too. Little minx. This is such a nice little poem that made me laugh out loud for its sheer honesty. Really well done and many many thanks for entering my contest that has taken a lot longer to judge due to illness. Thanks again for entering and for your patience
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This is just sweet I like kittens they are so innoncent and adorable thansk for sharing and goodluck in this contest be well
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Ahh, this is so good. Wonderful imagery here. How can anyone be cruel to such creatures? I love the rhyme in this too, flows really well. Good luck in the contest my friend.
With
Dark
Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Awwww this is cute and i love the poem. The voice in it is strong and quite humorous(spelling?).
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Oh, this is just adorable. I do remember these days with the cats. None of them are kittens anymore.
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