Finally, its about time
Do you know the reason why
At last I get to rant and rave
So much fun I’ll not deny
I get to grumble and grouse
Even whimper and whine
And if I do it well
My talent will really shine
Jumping up and down
Stamping my feet, waving my arms
I’ll really turn it loose
Proudly displaying all my charms
So look on in admiration
As joyously I scream and shout
I’ll lay it on real thick
So there’s never any doubt
That I am number one
The champion divine
Nevermore a question
That I am the king of whine
A contest entry
- Another Great Whine Out by pattyann4500.
1700 points, ended June 5, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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LOL I was so delighted to see your entry, Rob. I knew I'd get a smile out of it, and I did. You, most definitely, have proven yourself from time to time to be the true King of Whine. Thanks, my friend, for the entry. Patricia
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Too cute!!
I know a few "Queens of whine" lol
Gotta love them!!
perfect rhyme and great humor
your friend
darlintlc
Best of luck to you!!
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