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Swimming In a Tide of Regret

Lonely footsteps

through the walking

of time

disillusionment

casting its shadow

in

each

breath

tasted

the eyes see

but no longer

hears

the solitude needed

without fear

screams

wasted

on a forlong

thought

tomorrows forgiveness

waiting for

the colored

serpent

to devour

the need

of life's

constitution

for which we

bleed

another forgotten

hero

of yesterdays lies

waiting for

the confusion

of who's

in line

 

 

Author notes

an abstract take on the prompt and every other shitty thing in life i could find lol

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  • Little Miss Sunny
    May 23

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    I liked this. It is definitely not the style I would normally read, so I thank you for entering!

    Some great words and images are used in this. And the flow is great.

    Thank you for entering and good luck!

    Sunny