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When they look at me they dont see me,
They see what they want to see,
They look and stare,
and say things that hurt,
but they dont care.
Because they dont like what they see,
iam different and that scares them,
So they continue to stare and say thing that hurt,
But one day, i will be buried under the dirt,
And its all their fault.

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  • Frances
    March 31
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    I feel very sad .............

    When I read this poem..Where you sad when you wrote it? Nicely written .....


  • XxAngelOfPoisonxX
    December 5, 2008

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    This is a really good poem. Its well written, and I'm sure there are loads of people who feel this way. Good write


  • xXcrimsontearsXx
    November 18, 2008
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    jaded teardrop

    WOW this is exactly what I go through every day... I'm sick of it and it sux... This was beautifully written and I loved it... I think my favorite part was
    but they don't care.
    because they don't like what they see,
    i am different and that scares them...
    I liked that part the best I think... Very nice and beautifully written...


  • JakOb-Black
    June 4, 2008

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    dude...

    were the same... we just had different starings.... the more i get to know u... the more i realize that we are the same.... ur my best bro... and do me a fav. don't the the ass get to close to ur face....


  • VampireAlexia
    May 30, 2008

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    This is amazing

    I really like this, its both sad and inspiaring for me. Thanks to you I now know what I can do to get over a serious problem I'm having. Thanks again!!!


  • Blessed-Be
    May 29, 2008
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    hey r u mad at me and this is a good poem *trying to not cry


  • broken-angel
    May 28, 2008

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    aww am sorri you fell so bad....you should be proud of of who you are, bullies only target people because they are insecure about themselves...don't let people put you down...great write hun...keep it up xxx


  • Wings of Insanity
    May 22, 2008

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    Well you know what, anyone who doesnt like you, cause your different is a biotch, and they can kiss ur ASS...Im different and that scares the ou tof people cause, im bi, and i inflect death on them, but being different is good, cause you not like everyone else, and when u die, bring them down with you, caus ethen it would be their own fault that their dead and living beneath you.

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