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a Thing What Make Me Happy

  Some time I need a razor to remove my pain

And when I look back what I did makes me want to cry so much like rain

My life feels it is nothing but sadness

No happiness but only sadness

But only thing make me happy is my sweet razor that is covered with my blood

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  • myrataal silver member
    June 7, 2008
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    Flip it down the drain ...

    that pain

  • celadia
    May 23, 2008
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    I like the repeat of sadness in this piece, this tragic piece.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 23, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Emotionally draining this really hits a spot in the heart, I am sorry you feel this in life.
    If you ever need to talk I am here

    ♥
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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