Her belly protrudes
Oh, what a wondrous sight
A vessel of love
Holding the love of my life
I hear your heart beat
By pressing my head
I wait for your arrival
So much to be said
Anxious and fearful
For what you will find
This world is not perfect
But, I'll be by your side
A contest entry
- Picture prompt...check it out! by Li snuffles.
500 points, ended May 23, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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AWH! this was soo pretty I loved it!
I know the feelingof the heartbeat, its amazing and i could really relate to this!
Your last stanza stood out the most:
'This world is not perfect
But, I'll be by your side'
->Beautiful lines
thank you for entering and good luck
..xxx
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Thank you for hosting this contest. It was my first and it was a lot of fun. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. Best wishes to you and your baby. It won't be too long now!
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Im glad you enjoyed it, your piece was really amazing, It made me smile a lot and reading it over i can see why
I know the time really does fly in
I hope to see more trophies for you..xxx
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