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untitled


no words
just silence
screaming in the dark
how can I make you see
all of this pain
without spilling blood?

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Hidden Anger

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  • Unsigned gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    It is a good question poet...

    I really enjoyed this it felt like a tight spring waiting for release as I read it...

    Simon
  • imahealer
    May 22, 2008

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    I really liked your take on the prompt. What bothers me is the "title" "untitled" The only time I would use this would be in s series of poems about a similar subject and title them "untitled I" and "untitled II" Best wishes.

    Shana

  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    Oh my! a threatening cry out. Beautifully presented and executed. An enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp